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Monday, April 20, 2020

Writing task.

Hey once again for another post today I will be sharing my Writing task with you.
For Writing I had to Give and respond to feedback from a paragraph that I wrote on my biography last term so here's my paragraph.



Israel Adesanya was born on the 22nd of July 1989 born In Nigeria and moved to New Zealand at a young age. His Parents name Is Femi and Taiwo Adesanya both nigerian but they have Kiwi In them. Israel Adesanya has 4 siblings Debroah, Samuel, David and Bolu. When he was at School he got bullied for his size that was quite surprising because now he’s 6 foot 4. He’s a UFC fighter now but he started off with Kick boxing which he became the Kick boxing world champion then he went Into UFC.

So that was my post hope you enjoyed and see ya next time bye.
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1 comment:

  1. UnknownApril 20, 2020 at 9:52 AM

    Hi Quinn
    I enjoyed reading your post. I had not heard of Isreal Adesanya before reading this. Do you watch any UFC? Are you enjoying working from home?

    Steve

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